Thursday, 3 April 2014

Learning how swim.

Planning / Writing Frame: Introduction: Do you know how to swim?Learning to swim is in important.there are lots of reasons why and I’m going to show you three of the reasons. Paragraph Two: One of the reasons why New Zealand has one of the worst drowning rates in the world.twenty five percent of children age 0-10 don’t know how to swim. Paragraph Three: New Zealand is a small country that is surround by lakes,river,beaches and pools.During summer families love to go swimming because it really hot the some people don’t know how to swim. Conclusion: Learning how to swim is important Because when i first went swimming i didn’t know how to swim.Then now I know how to swim cause I go swimming lesson.

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