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Thursday 22 October 2015

Fear Factor

WALT:think about my purpose and reader by planning my recount.
Disgusting,Did they really eat frog eggs and pond water.Well that would be really gross and Disgusting who would ever eat that, Well today Mr Goodwin said ‘’that we are having a Fear factor’’.Everybody was really shocked because Mr Goodwin said that the challengers were going to eat food that human are not suppose to eat but he was just joking.

1. Introduction
Orientates and hooks
2. Body Paragraph 1
Mr Goodwin picked the challengers they were Christian,Hosea,Rima and Inez,they had to eat frog eggs and pond water, but it was just baked beans and kiwifruit juice
3. Body Paragraph 2
Then He got the food that they had to eat, Then they ate and the first person who ate it all was rima,but she didn't swallow the food in her mouth and
4. Body Paragraph 3
He said the first person to eat the whole cup wins and gets a free mousse?Then they ate and the first person who ate it all was rima,but she didn't swallow the food in her mouth and so Christian won,But it was just another one of Mr Goodwin’s tricks?
5. Conclusion
What I think about the fear factor challenge
I have learn't how to write my purpose and plaining my recount and making it interesting.What the task was about was to plan and recount with one purpose.





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