Tuesday, 6 September 2016

Narrtive writing

This is my Olympic narrative writing that I have been working on. You can read my story above or underneath. My narrative writing is about Usian Bolt, but in my story his name is Bolt. 

It was the 2016 Olympics which was held in Rio. In the Maracana stadium, before the women's  pole vault had just started the men’s 100m final race was next.

There were 8 competitors battling for 1st, 2nd and 3rd. When they said ‘’ the race is starting in 25 minutes’’ he was really nervous.He said to himself ‘’ I have trained for this day don’t give up yet’’ said Bolt. Everybody to the starting line.

As he walked to the starting line Bolt got more nervous and didn’t want to do this anymore. Something came to his head. He was thinking about how he knew that he wasn’t going to come first but still tried his best. Also his family would be so proud of him.

When he crossed the finish line he felt more better just after knowing he tired and didn’t want to give up. When he heard that he came 4th, he was so sad but happy that he did his best. But he heard over the speaker that one of the competitors was disqualified because USA Trayvon Bromell went before all the others. So that means that Bolt came 3rd and he was glad that he made the top 3.

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